Wednesday, March 1, 2023

How not to write like a stuffy professor

We're still slightly behind the syllabus schedule.  I'd planned to take two class sessions for discussion of Part I of Zinsser, but we didn't even get started with that material on Tuesday.  The plan for Thursday, March 2, is to cover *all* or Part I.

If you haven't done so already, please read the first half of Part I and do the previous blog post (It Takes Two).  Then, please read the remainder of Part I (pp. 24-48), and, in the comments section below, comment on the additional material you read. What additional ideas making writing fun and for becoming a better write do you see in these pages?



7 comments:

  1. The author began by talking about writing for yourself, which I think is a good tip to follow if you are trying to enjoy writing something. Becoming involved in your paper can establish a more enjoyable process, especially because you are expressing yourself through it and your own style.

    Expanding your vocabulary and using more expressive language can also bring life to your writing. Over time, a paper can become dull and you may be repeating phrases or words over and over, so it is good to be varied in the language you use.

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  2. I found the information from chapter five about a writer’s audience really helpful on making writing more fun. Zinsser says that the best type of work, is that written by someone who only wrote it for themselves. If I’m going to write a paper for a large group of professors, I’m probably going to be a lot more nervous about it and will be more concerned with how my audience will perceive my work. However, if I’m writing something with the idea of my audience just being me, I’m going to feel a lot more free to write the way I feel or think about a certain topic.

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  3. Something that I liked from the second half of Part I was the chapter on usage. I think this chapter can help us all become better writers because when we focus on the usage of our words, it creates some discipline with the words we use. It can also be fun because it gives us as writes new ways to think of and use words.

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  4. What makes writing fun is being able to write the same thing in different ways - dependent on audience. I'm not going to try and explain the legislative priorities of Northern over the past twenty years to 12 year old the same way that I would to 30 year olds or to professors. Being able to have a deep understanding of a topic and express it to different groups while still getting the important parts of your argument across is what makes writing fun.

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  5. If your write for yourself your writing will be far better for the reader for you are using your form of writing in your own terms. Trying to copy others tones and characters will make writing for you much harder and far less enjoyable. Write for yourself and you will improve greatly and have a fun time writing a great paper.

    Word usage is also a key aspect when writing anything. Make sure you use your own language but also add in some different aspects of words to spice up the paper you are writing. Overall, this book was great to read and helped me especially in writing this paper for the class.

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  6. One thing that stuck out to me from this section was when the author talked about usage. One thing that I've fallen into the habit of is using the same words and phrases over and over again throughout my writing, especially when writing a longer paper. But in this section, the author talks about "cheap" words. "Why is one word good and another word cheap? I can't give you an answer because usage has no fixed boundaries." Once you write your rough draft going back in and changing some sayings or adding different aspects to your writing will only improve your final product!

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  7. The second half of Part 1 of the book was more amusing to read than the other. Simply because one specific chapter I like. In chapter 7 of part 1 you see the title is called Usage. At first going into this chapter I had some suspicions on what this chapter was going to be about. Boy was I wrong.
    This chapter had a deeper incite on what are called "good words" and what are "bad words" when it comes to writing a effective paper. Most students don't even realize sometimes what some words work well than others. I for one wasn't the best when it comes to Usage of the word Zimmer really did help me find more improved words to use during my paper for this class.

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